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PostSubject: My first go at a VJK poem :)   My first go at a VJK poem :) EmptyMon Aug 24, 2009 5:21 pm

So , here it is:

Thy Blessed Moon

Oh, gentle Mother Moon
Tell me with your wisdom,
and your pale smiling face
why The Kingdom of The Night
is in ruin and despair.

This story is so ancient, but continues
even to this day.
A battle where nothing is as seen,
but twists and intervenes
where Light and Dark meet and kiss.

The Children of the Night,
forever damned to dwell in Darkness,
already victims of their fate-
are faced with someone to whom
the Sun is a dear, gruesome friend.

Fear drives Them to destroy
the lonely Red-Rose King and his convoy.
Drowned in pain and tragic,
He sees no way but to oblige,
for his only love and unborn child,
are but a quite whisper of the wind.

What happened after that is a mystery to all,
but those involved.

The Queen corrodes the souls of men,
with a power no one knew was there.
Her love and rage melt together…

Humans and the half-blood children fight united
to seal the pure, white Queen that has gone
berserk in her strive to save the King.

From then it’s all just forgotten history.

Oh, hateful Mother Moon
Tell me with your all-seeing eyes
and soft, pale hands that reach towards the Earth
why is it that this story is so sad
and Death embraces everything that stands.


Be nice please!!! cute
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It's pretty good. ^^
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Thank you Sea! cute
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PostSubject: Re: My first go at a VJK poem :)   My first go at a VJK poem :) EmptyMon Aug 24, 2009 9:11 pm

Daisuki~

^^

Nice Job!
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Thank you Amnael! :flirtb:
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Thank you Sea! cute
You're welcome. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: My first go at a VJK poem :)   My first go at a VJK poem :) EmptyWed Aug 26, 2009 1:32 pm

Np, I prefer to write short poems xD

(Haiku's/Limericks/etc...)
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Thank you Sea! cute
You're welcome. Very Happy
very happy

Amnael wrote:
Np, I prefer to write short poems xD

(Haiku's/Limericks/etc...)

Actually... this is my longest poem EVER! Shocked
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OOOMG I LOVED, I almost dropped a tear here ;o;
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Embarassed Thank you soooooo MUCH Minime! I'm glad you liked it! loved
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dont thank me its very pretty ;o;
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*hugs Minime* <<<< Instead of saying "thank you". cute
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